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Verloren
tussen huizenhoge vragen
en zwalpende stiltes
in een wereld zonder antwoord
zonder stem.

Alleen
tussen komma's en vraagtekens
lege ruimtes
lange teksten over niets
zonder einde.

Verdwaald
ik weet niet meer waarheen ik ga
of waarvan ik kom
ik ben vergeten hoe te zeggen
"ik hou van jou".
:iconmystery-of-brenna:

Author's Comments

work in progress

stresses go as follows: 1-4-2-4-2

okay, too much of a cliché for my taste ... What do you guys think?

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:icontharphelius:
Wow.... feels familiar. I'm curious to see where this is going, but I like it already.

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Without knowledge or lustre or name.
:iconmystery-of-brenna:
I don't know either, really ... But like you say, so flippin' familiar, eh?
So, when are you going to post :D?
:icontharphelius:
Indeed it is.

Hah! I do not know yet, but soon, I hope.

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Without knowledge or lustre or name.

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